Monday, December 15, 2008

#9. Great Scene From the Movie "Shoot 'em Up."




Parts of the script. Clive Owen must enter the scene carrying the baby. He must also be carrying a gun. Then woman must run in a different direction. He must drop his gun. He must get hit by a car. He must drop the baby. He must shoot out both windshields. He must remove his seat belt.

Non-script scene decisions. The pun made by Clive Owen at the end. What car Clive Owen drives. What cars the attackers drive. How many attackers there are. What the attackers’ wear. What Clive Owen wears. What the baby wears. What type of guns the attackers use. What type of gun Clive Owen uses.

2 comments:

Ryan Benhardus said...

Ok, i dont know the significance of the baby in the movie if i did it would help. I think that when the "good guys" car roles that and the baby falls out that the baby gets killed.One way the baby could/should die is that the guy in the red car could run its head over when he is trying to pick it up. Or one of the guys in the van could shoot it when its laying on the ground. Another good way would be, that the guy in the red cars tire would pop he loose control then flip and land right on top of the baby. The final way you could have one of the bad guys grab it as they drive by, then throw it of a bridge or something.

tomorrowiswaiting said...

That was pretty intense. I don't know the significance of the baby either so I better watch the whole thing! I like that he looks carefree when he's being shot at, but I think it could be taken further yet. If he looked absolutely bored, it shows just how easy it all if for him. One other thing that could use a little attention is when a person gets shot. Once shot, the person just sort of disappears. I'd like it more if the viewer knew what was hit.